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MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' prologue 5 (end) by joelashimself MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' prologue 5 (end) by joelashimself
Wheels are in motion, the stage is set.
Now things can really begin.

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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
The question you must ask yourself, Trixie, is: Do I trust this sketchy stranger to actually be joking? I wouldn't take the risk of being a part of a murder if I were you. It's not worth it.
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:iconflamewing80:
Flamewing80 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the style you chose and the story is really catching. 
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:icontickletron2000:
TickleTron2000 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
:icontrixiescaredplz:o O (That's his idea of a joke?)
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:iconkilama:
Kilama Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
But why does Trixie look like a G3.5 pony? D:
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:iconjoelashimself:
joelashimself Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
Bite your tongue.
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:iconkilama:
Kilama Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
Nowth whath?
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:iconslawomiro:
slawomiro Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
End of prologoue, play the theme song! :lol:
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:iconyemto:
yemto Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
After that joke i don't want to continue reading, I'm to scared.
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:icontommyoliverdraws:
TommyOliverDraws Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dis gun b gud...
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:iconnoirpony:
Noirpony Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LET IT BEGIN!
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:iconamazing-ninga:
amazing-ninga Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You... You are a MASTER at shading. I mean, I'm good at pencil and stuff but I couldn't shade if my life was on the line (NO IDEAS). You're... AMAZING...
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:iconjoelashimself:
joelashimself Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
You're way too kind.

I'm glad you like it! Enjoy reading the rest of the story. Much more to come!
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:icondarkestsunset:
DarkestSunset Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You little TROLL you. >:3
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:iconsilentcarto:
SilentCarto Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Okay, I like this guy already...
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:iconderpybubbles:
DerpyBubbles Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Can't stop reading this! It is so well written and the art style is great! It's just the write balance of the show's style and the author's own style. I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
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:iconmortakiller:
MortaKiller Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
riiiight....
that 5th panel really looks like he's kiding about killing Twilight
*insert sarcasm face*
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:iconthesketchybrony:
TheSketchyBrony Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
You know its a damn fine comic when you begin reading them in the character's voices. Bravo!
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:iconk4nk4n:
K4nK4n Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
This won't be good... Interesting comic, by the way.
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:iconponymianrhapsody:
PonymianRhapsody Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
Your art style... I want to molest it.

No seriously though, the art in this is beautiful, and this has caught my full attention. *Watches*
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:iconeagle3302:
Eagle3302 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
End of prologue, I hope you are not testing me there I do expect the rest now...
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:iconzedanux73:
zedanux73 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The word "Changeling" springs to mind.
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:iconserpentsw0rdunlmtd:
SerpentSw0rdUnlmtd Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmegustaplz:
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:icontheharmonicdeviant:
TheHarmonicDeviant Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
RAWR!
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:iconthe-rarispy:
The-Rarispy Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
For some reason, I doubt it was a joke...
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:iconyuiopdude:
yuiopdude Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
It wasn't. It's simple really, there's more to it then just death, and this a** wants to do something far, far worse then that. He wants to knock her down, make her nothing. This stallion wishes not to kill the body, but the soul, to change Sparkle in such a way that she may as well be dead, one where her friends abandon her, saying "You used to be different... You used to be a friend..."

Honestly, it's just as bad as death, to so drastically change that you're not who you used to be. The one that everyone knew now gone, and the new you now has to find a way to live with it. Sometimes, the mind can't handle the jump...

But, that's rather grim for MLP... Then again, knowing this fandom >.>...
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:iconform89:
form89 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
No way. He had the evil villain eye last page. I'm calling it now. Dude is evil and has a plan within a plan much more devious than he will ever give off.
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Kitmaro Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
for fome reason that other unicorn reminds me of Orochimaru.
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SimpleInsomnia Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your comic, the style is nice and the drive is good, but I dont get the motive...

They are trying to humiliate Twilight Sparkle for thinking she's all high and mighty, when in reality Twilight was more humble in that episode more than anything while trying to protect her friends, and didn't even go out of her way boast after Trixie was seen as a Fraud...

Most people forget that... I just think your comic has no drive.

But i'm not saying stop making it, I enjoy it, it's just that if your trying to do a canon-esque story then stick to what actually happened instead of trying to go for a Conflicting View story arc.
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:iconjoelashimself:
joelashimself Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
You and I know that Twilight did nothing wrong, but Trixie is a small person at heart.
She's not looking for revenge because she's actually been wronged, but because her pride was wounded.

As for our mystery stallion, make no assumptions.
Does he look like a pony you could take at his word?
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:iconsimpleinsomnia:
SimpleInsomnia Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sorry, Meant that "The idea is good"
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sakenskunk Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
reads end of prologue he blink nd click click the page for the next page* n n nu MUST HAVE MORE * flails hooves* I needs moreeee!!!
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:iconjoelashimself:
joelashimself Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Stand by, homie.
It's on the way.
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:iconsakenskunk:
sakenskunk Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
indeed i will I love the art style of this comic.
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:icongothfoxx:
gothfoxx Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
can't wait to read more
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:iconuffefl:
uffefl Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Ooh this looks promising :D
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:iconzdforrest:
ZDForrest Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student Filmographer
Awesome!!
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:iconmetapsionic:
metapsionic Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Dun dun DUN!

I really like the artistic style, I hope to see more of this :-)
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:iconxxberrysxx:
XxberrysxX Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the last box is total epic face!!
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:iconthebaraclough:
TheBaraclough Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Hate to be "that guy" again but you also misspelled around by putting two r's in it. Sorry if you don't care or anything like that but just wanted to let you know >.>. Still love this comic!
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:iconzaiali:
zaiali Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
I hate you even more now trixie.
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:icontanksmallcape:
tanksmallcape Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You have MY full attention, sir. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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:iconavatar-noah:
Avatar-Noah Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
this is amazing!
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:iconelmikkino:
ElMikkino Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
I love your style. The eyes are just mesmerizing.
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:iconabdul76:
Abdul76 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
I simyl ADORE your style. Trixie's faces are so awesome, I can't take it!
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:iconbigccv:
BIGCCV Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Increible trabajo, y mas por el prologo XD watch =P
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:icontechogre:
techogre Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the style. Looking forward to your work.
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grimreeper2121 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok now im hooked! lol we need the great and powerful trixie back
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:iconfimvisible:
FiMvisible Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Beautiful drawings and really interesting story! Can't wait to see more! :)
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:iconeltunagrande:
eltunagrande Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
I love the way you draw Trixie, so expressive.
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:icondahvipahvi:
dahvipahvi Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
i love your style to draw c:
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