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MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' prologue 2 by joelashimself MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' prologue 2 by joelashimself
Poor Trixie, she seems down on her luck.
What's this strange Unicorn after?

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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
This guy looks like bad news. He wants your soul, Trixie! Run!
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Darth-Silas Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013   Artist
The long hair/mane in the stallion's face reminds me of Howl from Howl's Moving Castle. To me his voice actor would be Christian Bale, Howl's VA.
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TigroSpottystripes Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
Hm, is that gonna turn out to be Sombra?
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SouthernNight Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what's up with the double v in "rivver" on the last frame? O.o other then that wonderful comic... I'm loving it!
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joelashimself Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Never been a master at spelling.
The art takes over my mind and I get a bit distracted.
Glad you like the comic.
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thesillypony Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
"Trixie thanks you for your attendance, now kindly go jump in a river."

I'm already loving this.
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:iconjoelashimself:
joelashimself Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
I'm glad! lots more to come!
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:iconlilkydd:
LilKydd Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
From one traditional pony comic artist to another, thanks for putting this on here, It's super awesome sauce.
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:iconjoelashimself:
joelashimself Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Thanks man! I have not yet begun to scribble.
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:iconponymystic:
PonyMystic Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that GASP face lolol
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:iconacacia-rabbit-desert:
trixie ;_;
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:iconvree:
vree Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
Kickass style.
I actually liked the stallion character a lot. (I do not usually do, but I think you caught the right look here.)
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:iconk4nk4n:
K4nK4n Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
That unicorn stallion talking to Trixie... something creepy about him.
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:iconrobokitty:
RoboKitty Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Hate to nitpick, but you misspelled "river"
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:icontrue-solunar:
True-Solunar Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
2nd to last panel: "river" is spelled "rivver"
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Happytimeindustries Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
not to criticise or put down, I like your style very much. but it's river, not rivver. once again not mocking you or anything I hope to see more of you on EQD BTW Congrats on being featured ^_^
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:iconcoolclaytony:
coolclaytony Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
Your waitress pony is adorable... that is all.
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:iconbrambo96:
brambo96 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
River has one "v"
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:iconcommander672:
commander672 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
Kinda looks like Trixie's about to be recruited for a DnD quest.
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:iconbb-k:
BB-K Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ouch, a rude move on the waitress and then a barge in.
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:iconfenwolf2003:
Fenwolf2003 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
Shitty OC, lost interest instantly. Glance at future pages reveals more boring Trixie and Twilight stuff.

This comic is simply too standard and boring.
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joelashimself Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
Thanks for your criticism.
I welcome everypony's observations.
Any suggestions on how it could improve?
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Fenwolf2003 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
Well, to me the suggestion would be just have a comic about Trixie being Trixie instead of just following the boring idea of her and Twi's rivalry. I guess I should be happy at least you aren't shipping them (yet, if you do there's no chance for this).

But meh, the dark and 'aggressive' stallion that randomly appeared? He's pretty fucking boring. Saw him and he's so cliche I just rolled my eyes and couldn't be bothered.
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:iconcrapfacehead:
crapfacehead Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Bitch you just jealous of his great and powerful swag-
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:iconsm51:
SM51 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
:iconnotsureifwant: Jk..THIS IS GREAT!!
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:iconkillkatt:
KillKatt Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
Cool >=3
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Darkshadow65 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Creepy Unicorn and his eyes 0_0
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NotAGoodUsername360 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
...beware of unicorns bearing gifts...
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